Libernico's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Meet: Skulz the Barbarian and Crawbone the Zombie Pup!]

Wait... You do ALL the work on a trackpad?!!

If that's the case it's very impressing!
I would recommend doing a paper sketch first. Jazza has a great tutorial on how to digitalize here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z0n2FNK8sDI&index=2&list=PLNaAcA0yN3KZ_zsdf68T0gBMJp_KYDPli

I know not everyone has access to a scanner, but the change would be great to decrease the strain in your hand.

Also I would change the pose a little to give emphasis to the weight of the club since right now it doesn't look heavy for how big it is. And move her left hand a little so it doesn't blend with the hair (or change the color of th gloves)

Rayiless responds:

Thanks, yeah I did all the work on a trackpad, but getting a mouse soon, though it may be a shitty basic digital one.

As for hand drawing it in first I did, but the line work on that one was a bit worse and the proportions were even further off so I went in with the pen tool and traced over everything to make it look better. I think it looks much better than the orginial hand sketch, which if you want to see is in the WiP thread on page 4 near the middle: http://www.newgrounds.com/bbs/topic/1417254/4

I did watch the that and it was really good, just like all of his I think I just need more practice and to learn to be more efficient and not go into too many shading details at times.

Okay, thanks the pose did look off to me, but I couldn't figure out what it was at times, and also working with what I have doing major changes by the time I notice them are hard and I often don't have time to fix them.

I also think Crawbone turned out better overall, but certain parts of Skulz turned out perfect to me, like the gem in her hair, skull belt, and tuffs near the armor.

Thanks again for the comments! I also checked out your piece looks good.