Libernico's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Leon Vs Captain America]

Wow! This is really good.
You have some problems with proportions (Captain America's head looks much bigger tan Leon's) and anatomy (Lion's left leg shouldn't be ale to be that way without the hip rising a little and turning towards the camera), but overall it is very well done.
The thing that bugs me the most is the background. Doesn't make too much sense to me. Also, the lighting on the background (From the bottom) is completely different form the character's (from the top)

Keep up the good work!

SergioArturoLopezMor responds:

the Captain America is to big, because he is a boss, you know logic of the videogames, and I consider this picture an incomplete work because I m very lazy for this kind of ilustrations, thanks for your comment anyway

[Raindeer]

Nice choice of colors and technique. Your composition is good in general but needs some work. The sky needs more space, right now it feels like an intruder on the picture. Also, try not to chop parts of the element that draws attention, the cropped leg ships the attention away from the rest.

Keep up the good work!

[Ruby Rose Action Animation Thingy]

This is awesome. Is there a finished version? I would love to watch it.

mikemichaelmic responds:

Thank you so much Libernico :D! Unfortunately though I never got around to completely finishing it as I kinda ran out of steam with it, sorry :p. I have been meaning to make something new soon though!

[Zoom Zoom]

I really like the design of the dragon. It looks very cute and contrasts well with the appearance of the enemy.

The composition helps to read the image in an interesting way. Given the order and color of the characters, you can't help but notice first the desperate dragon running and then the monster pursuing it.

The only thing that bothers me is the white background. I know that a simple one that complements the characters but doesn't distract from them would be hard to achieve, but I think you can manage it.

[She Hulk Relax]

The anatomy is really good and the hair looks fantastic.

The face features are too soft, making her a bit unrecognizable. Also, The rubber ring looks unaffected by her weight.

DidiEsmeralda responds:

Thank you for your comment Libernico :D

[#epicartyparty]

This has a remarkable use of perspective as well as a very effective composition that draws your attention to the character in the yellow shirt (whom I think is from the movie Treasure Planet).

It has a very cheerful feeling and the fact that those subtle details in the background indicate that the party extends beyond the horizon serves to make it feel epic.

I think it would be useful to give it more thought to the anatomy. The left arm and the left leg of the guy on the yellow shirt look kinda broken.

On another note, on my end it appears that you submitted this the day after the dead line, the 21 of this month. I really hope that it is just a matter of different time zones since it would be a really good contender.

Good luck!

fondimon responds:

Thank you so much! yeah next time i need to use a reference so my anatomy is spot on.

[Lapis and Peridot]

The art style is awesome.
The poses are really well done. Even if they are similar, the subtle changes makes them portray completely different personalities. They fit the characters very well.

The only thing that confuses me is the clothes of Lapis. She appears to be cosplaying as something (I'm ignorant as to what she is dressed as and I really want to know) while Peridot isn't. thanks to that, to me, they don't look like they fit well with each other in this picture.

Smashega responds:

Thank you :D !! Lapis isn't actually cosplaying as anything. It was just a random outfit I thought up. But yea, I definitely get what you're saying.

[THE WAY TO THE PARTY]

First, If this is for the challenge of the month from Jazza, you should tag it accordingly with "epicartyparty" instead of "epic-arty-party". Also, add a link to an image of your work in mid process in the description. I really hope you manage to do those changes because your piece is very good.

I have two advises:
1.- It would be convenient to flip the image horizontally so that the flow of the colors goes upwards instead of downwards. It would be more energetic that way, since we read from left to right.
2.- Try to make the girl pop up more since right now it's really hard to distinguish, You could change the contrast or use a thicker outline in her.

Keep up the good work!

Shriram responds:

Thanx for ur advice . I am gald you liked it:)

[inner spirit]

This is a really good concept. The contrast between the old man and the lion serves to convey very well the meaning of the phrase.

I would like to see you revisit this concept, just not as a sketch.

ZekZekoun responds:

thanks!! ... I'm thinking about doing a child and monkey combo.

[A Character portrait]

Really nice color choosing! I love how the different tones on the shadows work with each other.
Being a portrait, I think it would work better to have a more plain background. The brightest spot is not on the character, it's to his left, which is distracting.
The overall construction of the face is very nice and gives a feeling of maturity and pride. The only think I have to point out is the position of the mouth. The way it looks now, it appears to be located more to the right side of his face.

Keep up the good work!